Feedback from pitch

We believe that it will be hard to create the 'magic fantasy' effect without any funding, however widening the target audience is a good idea, and if shot well could be achievable.

We like the idea it seems achievable but i think you need to make clear the the dream from the real life part and also make sure you know where you're going to film.

Also, you have a good idea, which implements the themes of performance, and conceptual videos, however, we are unsure what the full narrative is.

We thought your idea was good, perhaps you should look at 'the wizard of Oz' for inspiration?
:)

i thought it was a very original idea and should work well.

need to be careful if you wanted to make it conceptual, we didn't understand if thats what you wanted to do. we really like the song though and think if you plan it well it will look super cool :D xx

Response to Feedback:

overall they thought it was a good idea, but really we needed to clarify the actual narrative. when filming we need to make sure that the audience can tell certain aspects of our filming is a 'dream world'.

teachers response:

what we need to include within the lyrics and we have many beat changes so we need to use this to our advantage.